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Post by Melissa Harding on Jan 17, 2008 2:04:04 GMT -5
The Plot;
Including; Colton Nozuka
Reed Thomson
Vanessa Lewis
Melissa Harding
Remy Barboza
Summary; that doesn't look much like a summary, more like a novel x]
Melissa Harding, your usual high school girl, usually falling in love with the bad guys. But your unlikely bad guy, Reed Thomson, made her fall for him instead. Melissa looked into his eyes and knew that there was something there in his little smile that she wanted. He was an actor like her, and he’s older as well as cute, so in Melissa’s eyes there couldn’t be any one more perfect. Reed had successfully made Mel head over heals for him, but the feeling wasn’t mutual. He just enjoyed Mel, he enjoyed playing with her and having all the power, though not in a cruel way. Reed kissed her, and there was something special about that kiss but he didn’t realize at the time.
Vanessa Lewis, Melissa’s best friend, a nice enough girl with a bit of a ‘naughty’ side caught the eye of Colton who only saw her as a toy good for one thing. Melissa welcomed him to sit with them with open arms, feeling instantly attracted to his bad-boy look. Both Vanessa and Melissa liked him; he charmed them both into thinking that he liked them back. It wasn’t long until both of the girls started to compete for his attention, inviting him to party. Colton, ofcourse, knew that both of the girls liked him and all he would have to do is play them one against the other and he could get all that he wanted and not to mention that he had another one, Remy, lined up right behind them.
Remy had had a crush on Colton for a while, and Colton played her along. They were both drummers, as was Vanessa, so they were already ahead of Melissa because they knew Colton better. Colton would look at Remy and smile at her, giving her a wink every now and then or he would look at her and as soon as she looked at him, pretend he wasn’t looking. Remy knew he was looking, and she thought that Colton felt something for her. With Vanessa it was a little different, he was a bit more full-on flirting with her, playing little games and such, and one had resulted on her giving him a kiss on the cheek. With Melissa he was a little bit of both, but he could never make her or Remy go as far as Vanessa would, flirting wise.
Now, as for the big party which took place at Ritz, that was complete disaster. All three girls and the two boys were there, partying and drinking, doing things without thinking. Reed was dancing with some girls which made Melissa jealous, so she went to try harder with Colton. Vanessa was flirting big time with him, absolutely pissed. Colton was also drunk, and had Melissa and Vanessa in his arms. Colton yelled that he was going to be sick so Mel and Vanessa took him into one of the rooms. Remy who had just arrived saw both of the girls in Colton’s arms, and immediately thought the worst when she them going into the rooms. She walked out crying, feeling that she was silly to think that the two were he friends and even sillier to think that Colton liked her back. Reed also watched curiously, his jealousy fading, he knew that Melissa wouldn’t put out, but she was drunk, so he was unsure.
Colton was sick, and Vanessa and Mel were by his side taking care of him simple mindedly, giggling to themselves because the alcohol had taken effect. Mel offered to get them both a drink, hoping to look helpful, and both Nessa and Colton agreed. Melissa went to get the some punch, looking straight past Reed who knew that he was safe, Mel was still under his spell. Colton forgot all about her and grabbed Vanessa and gave her a kiss, forgetting his plan to play them all along for a little while longer. Soon he was on top of her on the bed, making out fiercely. Melissa walked in and dropped the drinks, shocked and annoyed. She gave a little whimper before storming out, her face in tears.
Vanessa knew she had to go after her, and tried to make Colton get off but he was too drunk to think of anything else. Soon enough, he was beginning to lift up her top and Vanessa punched him in the face, she needed to run after Mel. Reed saw Melissa storm out crying, and immediately made an excuse to the girls he was dancing and ran after her. He found her, and took her out the back of the hotel where it was deserted. She cried into Reed’s arms, and he sat and listened patiently, he knew when he needed to be a good friend. Melissa told Reed that she loved him, and didn’t answer, but Mel didn’t notice, she was talking more to herself then to Reed. Reed took Melissa back to Hoffman, and said goodnight, his thoughts occupying his mind.
Vanessa searched for ages, trying to find Melissa as well as feeling regret for leaving Colton. She almost had him and she let him go for Melissa, who, ofcourse won’t see it any other way but hers. While Vanessa was searching she cam across someone else; Remy. She was sitting by herself crying and heard Vanessa approaching. Vanessa had to find Melissa, so she ignored the fact that Remy was crying, she didn’t have time to comfort someone else. Remy stirred Vanessa up, mumbling that she didn’t care about anyone but herself. Vanessa yelled back, that of all the times for Remy to pick a fight with her it had to be now. Remy told Vanessa that she liked Colton, and she felt betrayed that her ‘friends’ we’re so busy thinking about themselves that they forgot about her. Vanessa and her yelled for a while until both of them were in tears and Nessa left, deciding that she would go back to her dorm and talk to Melissa in the morning.
Melissa woke and ran into Vanessa who had been waiting for her in the Cafeteria. Melissa decided that she wasn’t hungry and left before saying anything to Nessa. Nessa ran after her and this time caught her, and they talked. Well, more like yelled at each other, both saying what they felt. Once again, Melissa and Vanessa stormed off, Melissa taking refuge with Reed, the only closest friend that was there for her. Vanessa was alone, and just brooded in her room. While this was happening, Colton and Remy encountered, Colton apologizing and blaming it on the alcohol, trying to get Remy back in his grasp. Remy forgive him, but knew in her heart that it was wrong what he did and she should leave him, but she couldn’t leave those eyes.
Links;
all links that affect our plot in some way, here
Colton, Melissa and Vanessa Colton and Remy Reed and Melissa
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Post by Melissa Harding on Jan 17, 2008 23:03:45 GMT -5
UPDATED but i need you help in deciding your characters outcome, i thought i shouldn't choose for you. post here on this board with links that affect the plot, and tell me what you think and what can be changed. also, post here with the answers to the questions below that involve your character V
Things to be decided; Does Colton end up alone, or with either Vanessa or Remy?-The girls could just leave him to teach him a lesson, or he could end up with one of them and keep the drama going, the girl happy she got him and the other jealous and always picking fights as well as being all broody? Do Reed and Vanessa MELISSA end up together? -or will Reed decide they will be better off as friends, and the romance and flirting between them will keep going or will it stop completely with a heart breaking end? Do Vanessa and Melissa become friends again? -do they both forgive each other, or will they just fight all the time now? [/blockquote]
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Post by Vanessa Lewis on Jan 18, 2008 20:29:05 GMT -5
ooo questions for me
Well.... Vanessa wasn't really into serious relationships in the first place so I guess that means that she will not end up with Colton.
Umm, I don't really know about this one. If the answer to the next question is yes then the flirting will stop.
I think they will forgive each other. ;]
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Post by Melissa Harding on Jan 18, 2008 23:49:28 GMT -5
what? i dont know which one your answering...? [/blockquote]
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Post by Vanessa Lewis on Jan 19, 2008 0:43:41 GMT -5
I'm answering in the order of the questions, aka each paragraph is a answer
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Post by Melissa Harding on Jan 19, 2008 5:47:56 GMT -5
yeah, but why are you answering the middle one lol, thats me and reed hehe
i just went to see the golden compass no where near as good as the book [/blockquote]
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Post by remy barboza! on Jan 19, 2008 12:35:23 GMT -5
[url=http://hoffmanacademy.proboards66.com/index.cgi?board=practice&action=display&thread=1200540018]Colton and Remy[/url] Colton and Remy haha there. ^^;
anyways, for the first question, remy is a sucker for relationships and stuff. haha, so maybe remy and colton could end up together or something. xD and then remy would be all like, "nana booboo!" to vanessa. haha, but i guess it's up to colton.
and then, if 'nessa and melissa end up friends again and since remy got into a major fight with 'nessa, remy would be enemies with vanessa. and maybe remy's friendship with melissa would turn into a secret one? -shrugs-
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Post by reed thomson on Jan 19, 2008 13:15:37 GMT -5
hmmm. its really hard to say, but in my opinion, Reed is definately the type of guy that never knows what he wants. if him and Melissa were to hook up, they would, but then he'd probably not talk to her for like a week because he'd feel imbarissed and such. he's really stupid like that, really. It's obvious that he likes her and such, but he just doesnt know how to show it and he isnt really into being tied down. a heartbreaking end seems a bit to dramatic, but i think they should hook up and few times and he should leave her hanging. if i make any sense. aha.
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Post by Colton Nozuka on Jan 19, 2008 16:31:14 GMT -5
hmmm what an ending question.. He would probably end up with Remy because she was practically the first person he met at the Academy and then with all the drama and stuff happening. I wouldn't mind them together. Whatever you two want to do I'm fine with.
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Post by Melissa Harding on Jan 19, 2008 22:10:20 GMT -5
you guys are awesome *hugs* i think we will just decide as we go, and then update the plot as it happens? then we can do whatever our character feels [/blockquote]
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Post by Melissa Harding on Jan 21, 2008 20:55:19 GMT -5
i think happy endings are boring, i think mel and reed should both decide that it wouldn't work out, and remain friends with something more there, but they both choose not to act on it. [/blockquote]
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Post by Vanessa Lewis on Jan 22, 2008 4:00:07 GMT -5
I agree...
You need to edit the questions because the middle question says reed and vanessa so yeah
nessa will end up with no one because she really isn't into serious relationships. everything sounds good to me...
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Post by Melissa Harding on Jan 22, 2008 4:08:02 GMT -5
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Post by Vanessa Lewis on Jan 24, 2008 0:53:41 GMT -5
aboobalah!
Vanessa really does need another RP she only has the one in the courtyard
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Post by Melissa Harding on Jan 25, 2008 5:42:42 GMT -5
then make one retard. ;]
once the one in the courtyard and mine and reeds in done we'll open the party. we need colton to invite remy though. [/blockquote]
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